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Re: Skin Deep
This is an interesting piece. I like the re-occurring theme of plastic you have going on here, and think that this poem could be greatly strengthened if you try to ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: With Much Regret, I Do
I said I would review this, so here I am, lol. I can really feel the passion that you have for the topic in this poem. You've managed to inject ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Scabbards
Hi there. I thought I would stop by and give you a quick review. So, this story has quite a bit of potential to it. It's plain that you know ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Pinky Promise
Hi there. Just thought I would stop in and give this a review. So, it's a nice little story. I like the way you got the character interactions nailed down, ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Countdown
Hi there. Just thought that I would drop in and give this a quick review. So, I really like this. The main reason for that is you nailed at least ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: In-Flight (The Letter)
Hi there. Thought I would pop in and give this a quick review. So, first off I have to say that you show you have quite a bit of writing ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: A Glimpse of Death (ten times new and improved :D)
Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a quick review. So, you've got a nice base here. I like it quite a bit. But I really ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Of A Rose
Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, I like the imagery that you're conjuring up with this. It's quite lovely on its own. ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: What they are
Hi there! Thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, I have to admit that I liked the imagery you invoked when you talked about them flying ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: Love Will Save The Day
Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a review. They had Christian's service on a rainy afternoon. All right, I already have something to say about ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: Elizabeth
Hi there. Thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, you've got a pretty nice story going here. I can follow it very well and you don't ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Never Ending Land
Hi there. I just thought I would stop by and give my two cents on this. So, I really like this little story that you told here. And I also ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Preservation
Hi there. Just saw this and how it only had two reviews, so I decided to stop in and give it a review. First off, I have to agree with ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Who Wore Men's Cologne
Hi there! I thought that I would stop in and give this a quick review. So, you have an interesting concept and subject matter here, and I rather like that. ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Dream
Hi there! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer tonight. So, I really think that you have a decent beginning here. However, your rhyming is bringing you down. It's making ...
May 9, 2010
