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Conrad Rice

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Skin Deep

    This is an interesting piece. I like the re-occurring theme of plastic you have going on here, and think that this poem could be greatly strengthened if you try to ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: With Much Regret, I Do

    I said I would review this, so here I am, lol. I can really feel the passion that you have for the topic in this poem. You've managed to inject ...

    Jul 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Scabbards

    Hi there. I thought I would stop by and give you a quick review. So, this story has quite a bit of potential to it. It's plain that you know ...

    Jul 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pinky Promise

    Hi there. Just thought I would stop in and give this a review. So, it's a nice little story. I like the way you got the character interactions nailed down, ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Countdown

    Hi there. Just thought that I would drop in and give this a quick review. So, I really like this. The main reason for that is you nailed at least ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In-Flight (The Letter)

    Hi there. Thought I would pop in and give this a quick review. So, first off I have to say that you show you have quite a bit of writing ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Glimpse of Death (ten times new and improved :D)

    Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a quick review. So, you've got a nice base here. I like it quite a bit. But I really ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Of A Rose

    Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, I like the imagery that you're conjuring up with this. It's quite lovely on its own. ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What they are

    Hi there! Thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, I have to admit that I liked the imagery you invoked when you talked about them flying ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Love Will Save The Day

    Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a review. They had Christian's service on a rainy afternoon. All right, I already have something to say about ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Elizabeth

    Hi there. Thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, you've got a pretty nice story going here. I can follow it very well and you don't ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Never Ending Land

    Hi there. I just thought I would stop by and give my two cents on this. So, I really like this little story that you told here. And I also ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Preservation

    Hi there. Just saw this and how it only had two reviews, so I decided to stop in and give it a review. First off, I have to agree with ...

    May 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Girl Who Wore Men's Cologne

    Hi there! I thought that I would stop in and give this a quick review. So, you have an interesting concept and subject matter here, and I rather like that. ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dream

    Hi there! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer tonight. So, I really think that you have a decent beginning here. However, your rhyming is bringing you down. It's making ...

    May 9, 2010


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind